Wednesday, May 09, 2012

ONCE upon a time....

When I was a little girl. Especially in winter, when the house was chilly. All us kids would pile into my parent's bed and turn off the lights. In the darkness, we would pile upon one another to have our version of stories before bed. My father would start, and open a tale of wonder that would be a few minutes long. Then my sister would take over, and around the group it would go. The tale taking many twists and turns and flips that it was never how my father would imagine it in the beginning. 


I would like to try that here with our friends and teammates. I would start a story, and in the comments, you each would take a turn writing three or so sentences. no more than five. Anything goes in your turn, from adding people, killing off others, or being absolutely creative. One you have had a turn at writing, you cannot add more until three others have written. Are you up for it? How long can we get the story?  Here we go!


The sounds of war were fading into the setting sun. The settling dust coating the blood soaked bodies of the dead, their glazed eyes left ever staring into the heavens. Moans, a sad wail, pleas to a far-off lover broke the silence, but eventually all was quiet.

Fog seeped through the bloody grasses to envelop the bodies in a damp shroud. The flit of many wings grew louder as the ravens came to perform their duties to their Gods, to carry the deeds of these warriors to the heavens. As the flock landed amongst the dead and dying, a figure stepped out from her hiding spot.

your turn!

4 comments:

  1. Sweat and blood mingled as they streamed down her face dripping onto her ample breasts. In one hand she wielded a mighty axe while securely holding a glimmering shield with the other. Every muscle tensed as she senses something lurking in the fog, all the while straining to make out the sound as it draws ever nearer.

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  2. That sound was the strangest sound that she had ever heard. It was the combination of a howl, a wail of pain or pleasure; maybe it was something totally normal. It was rich the sound of something that loved the blood and the sweat of war. It echoed in the fog no matter which direction she turned and she spun slowly trying to figure out where it was. And then it stopped and she froze....

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  3. Revliss, how are we suppose to pick up from that? All that build up, it is bound to be a let down. Quilp, I like how you put a hot dwarf in the story line... oh sorry, I mean...

    Staring into the fog, she thinks she catches a sight of something moving. Is it what is haunting the fog, or just another refugee from the war like herself? Straining to catch a glimpse of the whatever it is, she peers intently.

    Without making any sound, a hand suddenly grasps her own.

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  4. "Squeeeeeeeel!"
    In a quick move, she managed to twist away form the person and smack him with the blunt side of the axe.
    "aowiaowiaowi..... who got your panties in a twist?"

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